Being at the refinement stage, the feedback today mainly
revolved around the details of the project and the importance of presentation.
I have listed below the feedback for each of the products.
Identity Crisis Book:
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There should be breaks in the monotony
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The cover page portrays a confused hierarchy,
which needs to be fixed
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The placing of the parallel men need to be
thought about instead of being placed on intuition.
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The rope on the last page should be extended
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There could be similar iterations on the same
page
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When the final logo is displayed, it should look
as if it is the chosen one. Perhaps some sort of specifications could come
alone with the page.
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On the cover page, I should give myself credit
Brand Manual
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The cover needs to be refined in terms of
margins, placement of the pig and the abstractness of the sky
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Some of the headings need to be kerned properly
Poster
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Impossibility poster has too many words, there
could be fewer.
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Placement o type and layout
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Minor adjustments to make the message clearer
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The size of the Newspaper poster should be
reconsidered.
Notepad
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The cover should be in sync with what is inside
which is not the case right now
Presentation
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Think of how the whole package will work
together
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How the two books will look together in terms of
size.
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How everything will be presented.
Documentation
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There are a lot of ideas that are just doodles,
and hence need to be digitised properly for the documentation.
